Freeedom In Surrender

Falling to their ends
Will flailing make death softer?
Why wrestle against an hurricane?
You get blown away eventually
The sky is falling and I’m standing still
What’s the point in the running?
Resistance is futile
Life is pre-destined
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October 2, 2022 at 11:48 PM
And yet free will determines our response to every life impulse …
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