Freedom's Sky

9/11/13
Freedom’s Sky Phantom pain beneath the sting of time, un-dulled, searing flash across the face of humankind, horizon’s emptiness. Shadows cast by ghosted steel linger in the blue skied minds, shrouded in the creeping dust. Tears that will not fade, hearts that cannot fill a hole in freedom’s sky. John G. Lawless 9/11/2013
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Shetley Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:13 AM
This piece really draws you in to the melancholy. Well done.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Potent.
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