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Freedom's Pub

A misty fog shrouds the valley they gather in the freedom pub tattered olive-green memories fear laid waste by valor tears denied their proper time ghosts that rue the passing of every soldier’s night. John G. Lawless ©11/17/2022

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Date: 11/17/2022 7:02:00 PM
Been there... You're right... ~ Tears in my beer
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Date: 11/17/2022 2:06:00 PM
I liked this, John. Short and sweet but packing a powerful message!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2022 4:56:00 PM
Thanks Milton, I read the contest title and the muse headed into the fog.

Book: Shattered Sighs