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Freedom's Call

Far across the hills and dales, Ringing o'er the rills and swales: Ever nearer, ever louder; Ever dearer, gaining power. Drawing hearts and minds to one; Once sounded out, and once begun Men cannot fail to hear her calling- Solders freed from fear of falling. Calling, crying to her sons, "All must fight till freedom's won." Leading them to victory; Leaving them with liberty. (Written on the fifth of July, 2015)

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Date: 1/18/2020 1:49:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! beautiful!
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:42:00 AM
Acrostic poems are difficult when they often seemed forced ! Yours flows naturally and beautifully ! Congrats to you!!
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:26:00 AM
Beautifully done ... Love the rhyme! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 7/23/2015 8:38:00 AM
An excellent acrostic, Isaiah! The cadence and rhyme are perfect! Congrats on your placement in my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:47:00 AM
beautifully expressive Isaiah many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Isaiah ! Great work!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:34:00 AM
Isaiah, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/6/2015 10:34:00 PM
Honestly, I was a bit skeptical when I saw this newest poem was an acrostic. Previously, I've only been hit with the blocked restriction of the form which left me unmoved. However, to say yours is an exception is an understatement. The words flowed smoothly and rhymed so effortlessly that I finished reading delightfully impressed! Great work!
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