Freedom Writer

I write what I feel and as each verse of this poem enhances the knowledge that one 
posses
Inside their brain 
Driving you insane in which my metaphoric & poetic
Lyrics changes your mind set 
And I bet by the end of this poem I guarantee that 
Thing that you would never expect would be a death 
Defying moment that you will never forget.
In order to succeed, the desire of success should be
Greater than the fear of failure 
Because with out sacrifice their is no 
sense of achieving victory
Life is as the same as a roller coaster
As each click scares you until it gets to the top 
And then drops 
Each scream gets worst and worst tears come out cus
Of the fear that they feel 
Don't hear me 
Listen to me 
Cuz as much as its been repeated we have to learn to crawl before walking 
Babys babble before talking 
At the end of the day we proceed and follow the goal
Of succeeding.
I am the freedom writer cuz im known as speaking freely 
To my public 
Expressing what I feel and putting it down on paper
I am the lover never the fighter 
The first expression perfectionist
I attack the new challenges and never bacc away from them 
They call me Mel for a reason
Who else you know they call the Most Efficient Lover
Now tell me who is the bitter.
I wake up 2 poetry....I live it....breath it....
I have succeeded in it 
And as I try to strive perfection
In order to get to the top I have to go through the 
Battles 
Shielding my way through challenges 
I am the hercules of modern time
As I take my rhyme and read it to myself 
Everything seems fine
Because the purpose of a freedom writer is
To go beyond the line 
They spit 16 bars...I say why so many
When all I need is nine.
Listen to my rhyme
Because this benefits for the present
Past and future
I want to make history like shakespear
Turn my poems into plays of romance...
hurt and pain...Living in a world where the name of the lord is never to said in vane
We poets are freedom writers 
For those who are justing starting
Keep ya head up never give up
Never live the life of shame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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