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Freedom Pub

Comes the time when freedom expires
The gathering need of a patriotic cabal
One chancing upon such surely inquires
In time meaningful writing on the wall
Utmost secrecy Freedom Pub requires. 

Written December 8, 2022
Submitted to "Freedom Pub" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joe Maverick

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Joe Maverick

January 10, 2023 at 2:53 PM

Well Milton I gave you a second place..' in Respect of your makup as a man' I know you Would not want to be patronised, so I didn't Give you a first.' Yet I coulden't find it in me to Place you lower ' anyway i am quite the realist And being as you have gone over the finish line I am thinking you might put in a good word for Me? Lol.)))

Caren Krutsinger

December 10, 2022 at 4:32 AM

I think you are running this one up to the podium level in the contest.

L Milton Hankins

December 10, 2022 at 8:19 AM

Thanks for the comment, Caren. I had no idea what to write about the Freedom Pub. Never been there. Don't know what it's all about.

Jenna Logan

December 8, 2022 at 10:33 AM

Kudos to you for writing an entry for this contest. I have no idea where to go with the theme.

L Milton Hankins

December 8, 2022 at 11:37 AM

I had no idea either, Jenna. I have entered all the listed contests now, except for Unseeking Seeker's latest. I have no idea what to write about. I'm hopeful.

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