Freedom On Air Balloon Ride

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Hot Air Balloon Ride
            Leaving all cares, problems, life__
                                               Followed my shadow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol
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January 10, 2011 at 11:13 PM
Enjoyed this wonderful Haiku Sara!Congrats on your well deserved win!-kashinath
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January 10, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Sara,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.
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January 10, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Hello Sara, Well done hon, congratulations on a well deserved beautiful poem Lov, Shar
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January 10, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Love this one from the start... congrats my dear friend......Love Michael
Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Like your thinking in this one Sara. Congrats on your win in Skat's contest....:)
Richards Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:59 AM
If only we could leave our cares behind for awhile.....a nice sentiment!! congratulations on this fine haiku!!
Mehta Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on this first day of the new week, Sara. Love that last line! Andrea
Neels Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 3:26 AM
Sara, congratulations on your success in the contest ;-)
Mannan Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 2:59 AM
Many congratulations for this wonderful win Sara
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January 10, 2011 at 12:13 AM
a delicious ride, sara! great stuff so worthy of a big win the contest! : ) nette
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January 9, 2011 at 11:50 PM
Congrats Sara my friend on your super success in the hot air balloon contest with this wonderful write and entry ... enjoy another top ten victory tonight with luv...
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January 9, 2011 at 10:19 PM
SARA, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT
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December 8, 2010 at 1:27 AM
Hi Sara. Thanks for your kind comment. Great Haiku, very descriptive. Best of luck in the contest, Eamon
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December 6, 2010 at 10:35 PM
NIce one, SAra. By the way, on the indian giver. that is supposed to be limerick, right? Just in case it was in that contest. WEll, I better give it a rest. I hope I got mostly caught up on my comments here tonight! Luv, Andrea
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December 6, 2010 at 7:52 AM
"Followed my shadow" -- how true, Sara. That's the first thing I noticed from the hot air balloon, the shadow on FSU stadium below. Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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December 6, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Another great write Sara!!! A Wizard of Oz feal to it...best of luck!!! luv Michael
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