Freedom of Thought

A thought of the past flies condemned by the wind.
No more released than held deep within.
Bringing to surface this pain and this guilt,
And so I must now face this bridge I have built.
Regardless of truth, of fact, or of lie.
Its faith that brings light to an old midnight sky.

Awake or asleep, my conscience still follows.
Behind broken dreams, my future scopes hollow.
In time of redemption, of fear, and of hope.
It is truly my chance to tighten the rope.
Hung like a noose, yet closed like a cell.
My feelings of somber reroute me through hell.

Starting to win, or winning to start.
An uncertain heart starts drifting apart.
Put me to sleep, but don't close my eyes,
for i wish to see my thoughts as they fly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 5, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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June 4, 2010 at 2:13 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Cody. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 21, 2009 at 5:37 PM
a poet's dream for sure! Cody!... welcome to the soup! I enjoyed this fine write!... jimbo
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October 21, 2009 at 3:17 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cody. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 20, 2009 at 8:32 PM
This poem is so well written. I can also relate to it. I do have to add that we do have the power to control our thoughts as well. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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