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Vivid vitality, vast ductility, and opulent appearance. Powerful and fiery, bearing a deep sense of tolerance. We won't fail since we have sinew and dear freedom. A luring maxim to rank on the victor of a battle. Alike the eagle's eyes as they fly up a zenith saddle.  America's yielding was cognitive to be limitless. Ethical skills were set by the fathers to progress. Whenever they set to foster their ingress of liberty. The bald eagle fight with repute, uproar, and flood. Like the peak and seal, a fight for might in a spud. The bald eagle stands gladly by the clock tower. The Uncle Sam Flag and the star-spangled banner. The Statue of Liberty and the Americans who relish it. Empowering hook and eye fly over Satanic storm. We have tweaked our saws and freedom swarm. Our friend's eyes were loaded up with tears in Arlington. Deprived fighters who fought and died for liberty, won. Freedom isn't modest or free, troops die while fools rest! Under the starlight, frogs sang into the foggy wood. When I rested in freedom, I dozed deeply and stood.
Written: March 17, 2022 Freedom Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 3/18/2022 9:10:00 AM
The eagle always stands gladly...proudly and full of courage. Good writing, Lasaad.
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Date: 3/18/2022 5:19:00 AM
Your poem soars with pride for our country. Freedom rings throughout my friend. Win BIG, Lasaad.
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Date: 3/17/2022 8:21:00 PM
Very powerful penning Lasaad ! Freedom is the birthright of an individual and a country ! How many have sacrificed themselves at the altar of freedom. The bold eagle is adopted as the emblem of the US to refer to its authority . As a citizen of America, I see your patriotic spirit in this paean of a poem. Best of luck in the contest!
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