Freedom Is Here, I Am Flying
I’ll be back, I am flying
I will finish that book soon, as long I will stick to it
I will pray for me, arranging the thought, I wanted to make it a novel
So it will flourish and become something I can
Not an academic cultural studies, be proud of and fun read
Yes definitely, I like these lines, perfect this part is awesome
I like most, yes it has irony and it is witty
The words play a good sound in the ear I think so?
Yes indeed I lovet so much, writing should be read aloud
I do know what does it mean so when it plays a good sound?
Then its art in itself, ah lovely for me its weakness
But it does able or is not able to do what it should
Wings’ existing to me it is saying that
No matter how I have the means to do something
If that something is not able to do what it should do?
Then freedom is not there!
Wednesday, 12:28AM, 20 March 2013
Sandakan Nature City, Sabah, Malaysia
Let Us All Save Peace. Ilyimy. Layag Sug!
Copyright © Neldy Jolo | Year Posted 2013
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