Freedom Is Free

Freedom is free

                                             He bribed his way to the top
                                       Bribed his way to the pinnacle of his dreams
                                               visions,passion, prayers

                              he silenced the voice of justice by the treasure in his pocket

                                     he bought the words out of those standing for truth-
                                                   they tried to utter but words failed them
                                        
                         he made of no effect the words of the enlightened 
                                            by the gold mine in his bank account

                                                         but here he stands now
                                     with every success life can kiss ones palm with

           he stands boasting to bribe out of his way one last mountain:- freedom from guilt

                now he stands, but hustling to bribe the voice from the dark gently                                 whispering; Guilty!  Guilty! Guilty! 

                       Now finally he stands confused-hoping to bribe his way to freedom from         self-condemnation

                                     Light shines in his darkened understanding;
                                                            then he realizes:
                                       inner-freedom is free but who can buy it?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Nemadzivhani Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 3:07 AM
I dont know how many people came to my mind when i was reading this poem. .indeed buying your way up is buying your way to the prison of soul....i loved it. Well done Patrick.*Mashudu#SA
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 6:55 PM
I enjoyed giving this one another read. I hope this note finds you well.
Nigros Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Hi Richard Thank you sooo Much. It finds me well thanks. Hope you and you rainbow family are well. Regards Patrick Makama
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Ha, it's true...money can not buy everything. Another worthwhile message you have delivered with your words. Nice share! MC
A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 11:46 PM
Patrick great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **
Saunders Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Such a clear picture of reality Patrick. A good read!
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:47 AM
Truths that you have penned...Sara
Poshiwa Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Wow...amazing write here Pat...I love this........xx
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:19 AM
This is a sad tale, he paid an enormous price for his chains and in the end could not afford freedom because he is emotionally bankrupt.
Carrillo Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 12:38 PM
I just loved this poem and I agree with you. Inner freedom is free, but it can not be bought. Great write, thanks for sharing... lucilla
Eastman Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 11:24 AM
A very interesting read. I enjoyed the thought provoking build to the end.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace