Notes About The Poem

We often find a shade under a tree, but sometimes it is the trees that seek a shade under our hands. 

Freedom For Tree-Doms

In the shade of our hands great trees rest
And in the midst of our circle many forests hide 
Seeking relief from scorching greed
And the strong foul winds of menacing commerce.
Thickly they grow nourished by storms,
The storms of our words and deeds
That night and day stand with them.

The sweet birds sing to them 
About an old tree now long gone 
That one day woke to the terrors of a blade. 
Valiantly did she stand her ground
Defending her right to be a tree for a while:
Not sawdust, not plywood, not firewood--
Just a happy green tree for a good while.
"Freedom for Tree-doms!" she cried out that day 
To rouse trees and men alike
Against the terror of the cold steel blade.

But not a man, not a tree, rushed to her side
So alone she stood to fight her battle.
Alas, all she had for missiles were her pretty leaves,
Which in vain she hurled with a swing of her boughs
To drive the harsh blade from her mighty limbs.

Above the forest a little bird watched her struggle 
end
As with flailing boughs she drowned
In the sea of green below
To lie quiet on the forest floor.
On her soft fallen leaves that night 
Poachers crept while the world slept 
And bore her away to humming mills
In a town far from the birds that wept.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 4:59 AM
If you listen you can hear the trees speak and you can hear them weep when injured or cut down. Your poem is most beautiful Agona! Congratulations on having it featured. 7 ; ) Aloha, Connie
Apell Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Delighted to see you drop in, Connie! The trees indeed have voice and tears, perceptible to minds that care. Thanks for the 7!
Mohammed Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:51 AM
VERY EDUCATIVE THE POEM IS TEACHING US NOT TO CUT DOWN TREES TEACHES US TO PLANT TREES VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
Apell Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Thanks Abdul! The tress stand with us in the battle to make our world eternally beautiful
A   Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:48 PM
Amazing and well penned, Agona, it's a deep write... LINDA
Apell Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Linda!
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:30 PM
amazing imagery, deep write. SKAT
Apell Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 3:46 AM
SKAT, it's good to see you drop in. Thanks for the compliment!
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:01 PM
wow, this had such great imagery. I really enjoyed this poem showing such compassion for our wonderful trees.
Apell Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 3:43 AM
Thanks Andrea! The trees are one of us.
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