Freedom Awaits

Tired Ravens of night,
Fly away from your prison.
Daybreak brings freedom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations..well deserved placing..Charma
Chircop Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 1:35 PM
awesome haiku
Fraser Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Jimmy, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest. I liked your take on the picture >> James
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations, Jimmy. This is very nice and a great anology of lilfe! LUv, Andrea
Mckenzie Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Jimmy~ Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest you must be so proud , you should be! Laura :)
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 5:38 AM
congrats! Jimmy! me and my girls look forward every summer to travel to the forests of Northern Minnesota, near the Canadian Border, to observe the magnificent Ravens! jimbo
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 11:03 PM
Congratulations on your win with this special haiku. blessings, Connie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest.. an excellent write and win for u to so enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Devonshire Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Very nicely done, Jimmy. Congrats on your success in Raul's contest! Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Splendid, JAM! Congratulations on your win in Raul's sponsored contest!! Great job!! Love, Audrey
K. Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 11:15 AM
congrats on your win with this, wonderful and inspiring haiku, Jimmy!
Moreno Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Jimmy, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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