Poetry Forum Areas

Introduce Yourself

New to PoetrySoup? Introduce yourself here. Tell us something about yourself.

Looking for a Poem

Can't find a poem you've read before? Looking for a poem for a special person or an occasion? Ask other member for help.

Writing Poetry

Ways to improve your poetry. Post your techniques, tips, and creative ideas how to write better.

High Critique

For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!

How do I...?

Ask PoetrySoup Members how to do something or find something on PoetrySoup.


You have an ad blocker! We understand, but...

PoetrySoup is a small privately owned website. Our means of support comes from advertising revenue. We want to keep PoetrySoup alive, make it better, and keep it free. Please support us by disabling your ad blocker on PoetrySoup. See how to enable ads while keeping your ad blocker active. Also, did you know you can become a PoetrySoup Lifetime Premium Member and block ads forever...while getting many more great features. Take a look! Thank you!

Freedom

Zack Dicks Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Freedom which was written by poet Zack Dicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Zack Dicks

Best Zack Dicks Poems

+ Follow Poet

The poem is below.


Freedom

You've got time to book free
So, in two weeks you're off 
You've got time to pack up
You'll enjoy the travelling
Learn so much there
It'll be good for you to relax

We've got two weeks off 
A count down to being free
We should pack it all up 
It's stressful travelling
We'll unwind when we're there
We'll give ourselves time to relax

Today's the day I'm all packed up
I'm on my way two weeks off 
I've got some time to be free
I get motion sick travelling
I'll take some pills when I'm there
Then, I'll be able to relax

No more travelling
Clothes are all sorted and hung up 
What to do? I've got two weeks off
I could read by the sea in a hammock; free
I could wear sunglasses there 
Have time to snooze and relax

She throws a blanket here and there 
Catching the breeze as they're travelling 
The parasol sways where it's put up
It's about time we shared two weeks off
So, she can let her hair go free
Bask then tan quickly and relax

You said we had no more time to relax
You didn't want to leave there 
You said you were tired of travelling
You said you felt like throwing up
You'd enjoyed the time off
You said you were free

You are no longer free
We returned to a house with lights off
I say I'm fed up 
I say I'm miserable from travelling 
We share memories of when we were there
You say it doesn't matter where you are; just relax

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.