Freedom

The feeling I get,
so irresistable and impetuous 


The joy fills in me,
while I relish the world for free


So uncontrolled and unforced,
unbidden nor uncontrived


Nice to meet you Freedom,
So costless and pure


Have been longing to feel you,
and you feel extraordinarily phenomenal 


I'll never forget this feeling,
Just natural and sensational.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rashid Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 4:27 PM
freedom to me is a swwet thought ,,hope u had it in ua part..wlll i m still looking fr it..pray fr me..#nice write.. got a gud thoughtfulness
Abai Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 5:55 AM
You'll get it ,, good things come late sometimes! I will pray for you. Thank you !
Olaniran Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 10:53 AM
good one yoni abai.. freedom is for everything that lives... Love from Olaniran Nurudeen
Abai Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 6:21 AM
Thank you ! I very much agree!
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