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Freedom

Open, your eyes. You are naked. The blood flowing in your veins turns into fire. And you love it. The silence is gone. Gentle vibes set your body in motion. You can feel your heart tapping the rhythm. All your muscles are flexed, ready to speak. Arms spread slowly, like wings. Feet softly skim the floor. Breathe the sounds. Let them fulfill you. Free your emotions, dance ! There are no limits. You are as free as a bird, as light as a feather. Let the music be your wind, which will carry you away.

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Date: 9/11/2014 12:22:00 PM
very deep in soul recognize of other soul, thanks I like it very much !
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Date: 9/8/2014 9:03:00 PM
I love this poem Danka. It speaks to me. Maybe you could teach me to dance before I fly. Thank you for the read.
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:00:00 PM
Nice poem, Danka. I've written several poems about dancing. Your words created imagery which "carried me away" too.
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Cona Adams
Date: 9/8/2014 1:41:00 PM
Yes, I do. I taught country line dancing (as a volunteer) at three local senior centers.
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Danka Sikorska
Date: 9/8/2014 12:29:00 PM
I am really glad you felt this way Cona :) I love dancing ! I will check your poems, see your point of view :D Do you dance yourself ? :)

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