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The past is important because is is suppose to help you grow But how am i suppose to if every wrong thing i do you bring it up Then when i cry you tell me to suck it up Because when you show emotion you are weak Then when i think i am hard you remind me i will never be as hard as the concerte But even the concrete breakes So for goodness sakes Don't tell me what i am suppose to do because i am not a child any more You can't just give me freedom then inslave me mentally Then punish me when i am deifant like i have no say about what i wanna be Yes i understand that you have more experience and guidence But am i wrong for wanting to make my own mistakes or live Just for the drive just for the thrills You taught me the difference between right and wrong Plus everything i know Yet you dont trust me But my only questuestion to you is how will i grow on my own If you never took the first step and made the decison to let me go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/21/2014 4:46:00 PM
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April Jones
Date: 12/16/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thank You :) , Have a blessed day
Date: 3/12/2014 11:56:00 AM
I truly know where you're coming from with your thoughts of how you feel...parents will be parents though. You won't understand it all until you become one I suppose..excellent write!!!
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April Jones
Date: 3/26/2014 11:00:00 PM
THANKS . And yeah i suppose that is the only way to truly understand is if you are in their shoes.

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