Freedom

The sun is up,
I wish I’m out

Everybody’s running,
Everybody’s dancing

She’s eating hotdog in a bun,
He’s drinking juice in a can

The kids are eating ice cream,
While the babies are screaming

Mrs. Sun, please don’t go down, 
Please wait till I’m done 

So I can also play,
With you and have some fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Lets us enjoy that freedom, Sincerely Moses
Fraser Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Delightful poem Melissa>>James
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Sounds like an interesting and hectic but enjoyable day. Keep writing. Sara
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