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Freedom

The sun is up, I wish I’m out Everybody’s running, Everybody’s dancing She’s eating hotdog in a bun, He’s drinking juice in a can The kids are eating ice cream, While the babies are screaming Mrs. Sun, please don’t go down, Please wait till I’m done So I can also play, With you and have some fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/24/2009 7:04:00 PM
Lets us enjoy that freedom, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/24/2009 11:07:00 AM
Delightful poem Melissa>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 10:46:00 AM
Sounds like an interesting and hectic but enjoyable day. Keep writing. Sara
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