Sandra Haight Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

Written, September 14, 2024
For The Contest, “Let's Minichu On Freedom
Sponsor,  Mohan Chutani

Syllables: 
6,12,3  4,8,2  2,4,1  6,8,1

Freedom

A must for you and me-
Freedom is a gift we often take for granted;
It's not free.

Not guaranteed.
Must keep it straight- never slanted;
Our creed-

Our prize!
Free-will planted;
Rise!

A must for you and me!
Must keep it straight- never slanted!
Rise!

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Mohan Chutani September 18, 2024 at 6:11 AM Sandra, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best, Mohan

Crystol Woods September 16, 2024 at 6:50 AM Very good form and message! Congratulations! Xo

Marilene Evans September 16, 2024 at 12:06 AM Congratulations, Sandra. Powerful, but true.

Arthur Vaso September 15, 2024 at 12:50 AM He was a wise man and you wrote a beautiful poem. Sandra Haight September 15, 2024 at 4:11 PM Thank you very much, Arthur, for the visit to read my poem. I am happy you liked it, and I truly appreciate your kind and uplifting words. Sandra