Freedom

I emotionally desire the experience to be free,
where i yearn to stand undisturbed like a tree.

They say time can to so much, in my case so little,
i can feel myself interchange and becoming heavily brittle.

I long to recognize the sensation to be free,
i wish you were aware of how tender it is to be me.

My pennant days and lack of self confidence is something i cannot choose to ignore,
and now i am heartfelt like never before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 2:46 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:31 PM
TRACEY, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT *
Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 5:10 AM
Super write Tracey>>James
Nutter Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 4:45 AM
Excellent write. I can feel your desire sthrough the written word. Very nice
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