Jennifer Hartley Poet Rhyme

Freedom

You have the almighty power,
And I need you every hour.
You have me locked in,
And I don't know where to begin.

I am hooked on you,
And I don't know just what to do.
I try not to pop,
But I just can't stop.

I need help, I am crying out.
But I have so much doubt.
Please, stop messing with me.
Please, set me free.

I don't want to be mean.
Just help me stay clean.
Freedom, come over here.
All I want is to be free this year.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers March 26, 2024 at 9:29 AM Dear Jennifer, you have encapsulated the struggle for liberation from internal confines. The raw plea for release reflects the universal desire for autonomy and clarity amidst inner turmoil. I love how your words capture the essence of vulnerability and the courage to seek help and embrace change. May your journey toward freedom be met with compassion and strength. - Blessings, Daniel