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Freedom

You have the almighty power, And I need you every hour. You have me locked in, And I don't know where to begin. I am hooked on you, And I don't know just what to do. I try not to pop, But I just can't stop. I need help, I am crying out. But I have so much doubt. Please, stop messing with me. Please, set me free. I don't want to be mean. Just help me stay clean. Freedom, come over here. All I want is to be free this year.

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Date: 3/26/2024 9:29:00 AM
Dear Jennifer, you have encapsulated the struggle for liberation from internal confines. The raw plea for release reflects the universal desire for autonomy and clarity amidst inner turmoil. I love how your words capture the essence of vulnerability and the courage to seek help and embrace change. May your journey toward freedom be met with compassion and strength. - Blessings, Daniel
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