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Freedom

song is the freedom of captured souls, 
trapped in unseen cages with unreached goals, 
unravelled deep from heart, played with flair,
their melodies are set free in air, 
rebound from stony walls, flow down streams,
ripple emotions, make and break dreams,
echo from mountains to the blue skies, 
someone, someone please undo their ties!

rusty chains, shackles prison free thought,
black bird in the cage, yearns for her lot,
strings of violin play birds a lore,
of their happy days that were before,
freedom is greatest gift of our life,
that is often lost to human strife,
let them all free, let their hopes soar high,
let live in freedom, in freedom die!!

First placement
Written 26/10/2022
Lisa YY sponsored 
Painting prompted poetry contest
based on picture 3
in support of many women in the world who are denied basic rights- in countries with primitive laws!
9 syllables each line 8+8 lines
113 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Krish! A wonderful poem supporting women's rights! There is nothing more precious than freedom - a life with barriers is living like a bird in "unseen cages". How beautifully you have tied the picture with the theme of liberty! Love every line of your poem - reading many times, adding to Faves. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Dear Mala Very happy to have you on my page! your words always cheer me up! Congrats on your top win too!!
Alex Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:46 PM
"song is the freedom of captured souls, trapped in unseen cages with unreached goals" - began with great truth the entire poem is written beautifully. Congratulations!
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:33 AM
christuraj thanks! So pleased with your kind words! always happy to hear from you!
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 2:59 AM
Hallelujah Krish, another beautifully penned poem, your footnote makes perfect sense and enforces the real underlying message, the scourge of women being oppressed and murdered in the name of old misogynistic corruption of religion, we had it here in Ireland too not so long ago, cheers and good luck in the contest, David
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 7:53 AM
David, Thanks so very much for your lovely comment! Yes, the suffering of women in some parts of the world is suffocating!!! Hope logic wins over these rusty beliefs!
McBride  Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Great write and love how you are striving to help women to have there God given right
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:04 AM
thanks Stephen!! there has not been a greater holocaust than the suffering of women down the ages!!
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