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Freedom

Simple. A man sits on a mower in the park making lines and circles in freshly cut grass. And- Two mothers are pushing a child each on a swing, opposite directions. They talk as their children go up and down.

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Date: 1/12/2022 6:00:00 AM
Great imagery... A nice, crisp and sweet poem
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Douglas Brown
Date: 4/13/2022 1:39:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/10/2022 10:49:00 AM
What to say! you have a terrific eye to look at things! Yes! Simple it is! painted a nice imagery of Freedom, not to be grasped so easily through plain sights ! - Thanks Douglas - Marshall
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Douglas Brown
Date: 4/13/2022 1:41:00 PM
So glad you liked it! When we had no parks open in CALIF I really felt the absence of people, kids, moms and normal old life!