Freedom

Freedom is an ultimate thrilled

tide that quickens my praise filled 

breath as its promising, prism gowned 

waves pound glistening visions upon  

shores that tease my tingling touch 

by denying a complete catch for my

own freedom cache of liberty abilities.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 3:57 PM
wow, that is deep and very nicely crafted! It's one that got past me. I hope I have read most of your others. I only had five comments to respond to today. Maybe I will stay and see winners of Dear Heart's contest and then get home.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Lovely expression.
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 2:26 AM
Certainly one we take for granted, so many in the world would gladly change places with us. Tom
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Beautiful, CayCay...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Lovely done! My best to you in the contest, xomo!
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Wonderfully portrayed, 'Elusive Freedom.' Could be a mantra for our times, really. It's true of nations as well as individuals. Exquisitely done, CayCay! :) gw
Adams Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:31 PM
love the imagery you used to convey your thoughts in this one....very nicely done Cay Cay :) hugs
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