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I free write each poem I place on this page every word I write isn't stagged I don't really think of what will rhyme I just write each thing and fill out another line I am one child of a woman who was blind not literally but emotional and a man who was lost in his own life turned around and took it out on mine So tell me I did something wrong but trust him and beg to belong mother I cry out in a burnt out rage here I am in another daze Every word is underneathe my emotional wall how it use to stand but now it's broken how soon shall it fall?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2011 1:18:00 PM
For all the pain your poem provokes, you have a beautiful skill of putting your words together. Hugss
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