Free Write

I free write each poem
I place on this page
every word I write
isn't stagged
I don't really think
of what will rhyme
I just write each thing
and fill out
another line

I am one child 
of a woman
who was blind
not literally
but emotional
and a man who 
was lost in his own life
turned around 
and took it out on mine

So tell me I did something wrong
but trust him
and beg to belong
mother I cry out
in a burnt out rage
here I am in another daze

Every word is underneathe
my emotional wall
how it use to stand
but now it's broken
how soon shall it fall?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Blauw Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 1:18 PM
For all the pain your poem provokes, you have a beautiful skill of putting your words together. Hugss
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