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Free Wills Destiny

His Karma ran over his Dogma His dish ran away with the spoon He wonders if Destiny's planning To do away with him soon He found out the hard way that Free Will Comes with carrying charges and tax That between the tenets and credos There is little room for the facts She was sure that the Gods had her number That no matter which road she took There stood this fellow named Murphy Writing her name in some book It seems she was never empowered To challenge the powers that rule She simply grew as she flowered And challenged them all to a duel 9/14/2020 Free Will VS Destiny Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/15/2020 5:35:00 PM
See you in the winner's circle with this ingenious approach to the topic. Really great, John! Fantasy and Fate, Gershon
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2020 5:10:00 AM
YEAH....I'll be in the winner's circle looking for a corner to hide in...heheee
Date: 9/15/2020 3:29:00 PM
I love the very creative ingenious way you took this theme. Wish I could think up one so clever!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2020 5:09:00 AM
well Andrea I spent six hours with my 3yr old grandson and 6 yr old granddaughter yesterday and V I O L A...ZE POEM
Date: 9/15/2020 5:52:00 AM
Murphy, that guy. There should be a law... (love this, my best to you in the contest) xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2020 5:08:00 AM
and beware O'Leary's treatise on Murphy's Law..."Murphy is an optimist"

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