William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Free Verse On Love

Free Verse On Love

Our twain hearts be thou one,
a fixture in Heaven from the
start, inseparable - never
to part, where, our sole 
hearts impart, upon
blessed Earth,
forever be,
united,

Thou wilt inspire stars to sparkle,
upon thine Eden' countenance,
albeit, a useless matter as
they hast tender hints
of thee lingering,
in ages past,
ere stands,
a youth,
again,

Hence, thou wilt coerce a meandering
river to attune a melody, art, sway
its water kissing banks, and pet
its rocks, to enrich harmony,
and outstretched willows
sweep up swimming
wildflowers met,
bloom scents,
be just as
sweet,
 
Thou wilt soothe the gods to dedicate
songs to thee, play rhapsody of
both harp and lyre, atop Mt.,
Olympus be heard a
righteous accord,
lyrically well,
appointed,
words,

***United again, sweet words...

2020 February 23     

*1st Place*

STRAND no 690,ANY THEME,ANY FORM
~~Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman February 25, 2020 at 5:46 PM Congratulations WK on this masterful write with its wonderful imagery and formatting. Not easy to do! William Kelii Kekaula February 25, 2020 at 6:00 PM Yep, that formatting cost a few choice words to slip by, yet managed anyhow to get the gist of it--Thanks, Sam -- Aloha!~@wk

Sandra Adams February 23, 2020 at 8:25 PM wow… this is beautiful William...it speaks from the heart in wonderful harmony.. great entry for the contest... best wishes! hugs William Kelii Kekaula February 23, 2020 at 9:46 PM I extend my courtesies to your optimism shared, Sandra, along with your thoughtful words of encouragement, blessings -- Aloha!~@wk

Susan Ashley February 23, 2020 at 7:51 PM William, your mastery of language and imagery shines in this breathtaking poem. Such a beautiful joy to read. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan William Kelii Kekaula February 23, 2020 at 9:43 PM Susan, you are much too kind, as it is e'er so humble, that I am much appreciated -- Aloha!~@wk

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2020 at 6:07 PM Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. I enjoyed reading this work. Sara William Kelii Kekaula February 23, 2020 at 6:16 PM And thank you for your, "almost late yet being on time" entry, Kudos, Sara! -- Aloha!~@wk