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Free Verse On Love Our twain hearts be thou one, a fixture in Heaven from the start, inseparable - never to part, where, our sole hearts impart, upon blessed Earth, forever be, united, Thou wilt inspire stars to sparkle, upon thine Eden' countenance, albeit, a useless matter as they hast tender hints of thee lingering, in ages past, ere stands, a youth, again, Hence, thou wilt coerce a meandering river to attune a melody, art, sway its water kissing banks, and pet its rocks, to enrich harmony, and outstretched willows sweep up swimming wildflowers met, bloom scents, be just as sweet, Thou wilt soothe the gods to dedicate songs to thee, play rhapsody of both harp and lyre, atop Mt., Olympus be heard a righteous accord, lyrically well, appointed, words, ***United again, sweet words... 2020 February 23 *1st Place* STRAND no 690,ANY THEME,ANY FORM ~~Brian Strand

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Date: 2/25/2020 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations WK on this masterful write with its wonderful imagery and formatting. Not easy to do!
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Date: 2/25/2020 6:00:00 PM
Yep, that formatting cost a few choice words to slip by, yet managed anyhow to get the gist of it--Thanks, Sam -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/23/2020 8:25:00 PM
wow… this is beautiful William...it speaks from the heart in wonderful harmony.. great entry for the contest... best wishes! hugs
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Date: 2/23/2020 9:46:00 PM
I extend my courtesies to your optimism shared, Sandra, along with your thoughtful words of encouragement, blessings -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/23/2020 7:51:00 PM
William, your mastery of language and imagery shines in this breathtaking poem. Such a beautiful joy to read. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/23/2020 9:43:00 PM
Susan, you are much too kind, as it is e'er so humble, that I am much appreciated -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/23/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. I enjoyed reading this work. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2020 6:16:00 PM
And thank you for your, "almost late yet being on time" entry, Kudos, Sara! -- Aloha!~@wk

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