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My eyes danced in a room full of strangers Then fixed on one and wondered if he could kiss. But what I didn’t yet know was he saw me too. He saw me through the eyes of confusion. Who is she and why don’t I know her, My parents are deaf and I know everyone in the county who can sign! That was April of twenty one years ago. It was an attraction that has not gotten dim Nor has it lost any light It was an attraction that set the stage For twenty years of marriage delight. And I must say that on that first day The attraction was not for the way he smelled I remember that as being a little bit yuck, But that was just my luck. I went passed the nose and for so much more I got the guy whose love and life I could share. Attraction

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Date: 6/20/2023 12:42:00 PM
So does this mean he is deaf? Both your parents are, but are you too? These are new things I don't know about you, and interesting to know about. A nice poem of yours to come across, Miranda. Sure wish I knew which Miranda on FB was you!!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 6/20/2023 12:56:00 PM
I am sending you soup mail.
Date: 2/11/2020 7:34:00 PM
Nicely done, and congrats on getting your guy. As they say Art imitates life. and yours is nice love story.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 2/11/2020 8:23:00 PM
Thanks much.
Date: 2/2/2020 9:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win. You have a beautiful love story, Miranda, thank you for sharing it. John
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 2/10/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank you much. I love sharing this story!
Date: 1/23/2020 7:21:00 AM
this was amazing because it reminded me of my hubby and me. 23 years of being together and going through all the beauty that attraction holds. Lovely poem - thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 2/10/2020 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much. Thank you for picking my poem as a winner.
Date: 1/23/2020 12:51:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Miranda - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
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Date: 1/22/2020 7:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/22/2020 7:46:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 1/18/2020 5:32:00 PM
Hello Miranda Hawley, so nice to meet you. You never know where you will find true love. I am happy for you. Best wishes. Have a nice evening my fiend.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/18/2020 9:28:00 PM
Thanks

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