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My eyes danced in a room full of strangers
Then fixed on one and wondered if he could kiss.
But what I didn’t yet know was he saw me too.
He saw me through the eyes of confusion.
Who is she and why don’t I know her,
My parents are deaf and I know everyone in the county who can sign!
That was April of twenty one years ago.
It was an attraction that has not gotten dim
Nor has it lost any light
It was an attraction that set the stage
For twenty years of marriage delight.
And I must say that on that first day
The attraction was not for the way he smelled
I remember that as being a little bit yuck,
But that was just my luck.
I went passed the nose and for so much more
I got the guy whose love and life I could share.

Attraction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 12:42 PM
So does this mean he is deaf? Both your parents are, but are you too? These are new things I don't know about you, and interesting to know about. A nice poem of yours to come across, Miranda. Sure wish I knew which Miranda on FB was you!!
Hawley Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 12:56 PM
I am sending you soup mail.
Kinard Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Nicely done, and congrats on getting your guy. As they say Art imitates life. and yours is nice love story.
Hawley Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 8:23 PM
Thanks much.
Gondolf Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Congrats on your win. You have a beautiful love story, Miranda, thank you for sharing it. John
Hawley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Thank you much. I love sharing this story!
Scars Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 7:21 AM
this was amazing because it reminded me of my hubby and me. 23 years of being together and going through all the beauty that attraction holds. Lovely poem - thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
Hawley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Thank you so much. Thank you for picking my poem as a winner.
Barden Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 12:51 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Miranda - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
Chiri Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:37 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Hawley Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Thanks!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Hello Miranda Hawley, so nice to meet you. You never know where you will find true love. I am happy for you. Best wishes. Have a nice evening my fiend.
Hawley Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Thanks
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