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Free To Go, Free To Stay

adrift I let the waves take me where they will,
time becoming a moment universal cast in a sunray.



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rebstock Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 4:51 PM
I find this uplifting as that is how I feel now retired, adrift, but taking in moments of sunrays.
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:53 AM
Enjoy every minute of it !
Rose Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:24 AM
Nice thought…. Freedom to drift. I like it as it applies us all…. Darrell
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:05 PM
Thanks, Darrell ~
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