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adrift I let the waves take me where they will, time becoming a moment universal cast in a sunray. Submitted on July 27, 2022 for 2022 POETRY MARATHON MILE 10 sponsored by MARK TONEY AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Originally posted on July 4, 2022

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Date: 8/15/2022 4:51:00 PM
I find this uplifting as that is how I feel now retired, adrift, but taking in moments of sunrays.
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Date: 8/16/2022 3:53:00 AM
Enjoy every minute of it !
Date: 7/5/2022 2:24:00 AM
Nice thought…. Freedom to drift. I like it as it applies us all…. Darrell
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Date: 7/5/2022 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Darrell ~

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