Free Soul

" Free Soul "

She was just a fifteen year old girl
her life was starting to grow
her average life as many teens
they think it all they know.

She was not ready for this world
some things she has to learn
a worried parent sitting alone
for them now they yearn.

Her little girl is growing up
she went with friends this night
she drank some beer then was drugged
slowly loosing her sight.

It happened without a warning
this 19 year old boy would have a try
she lay there without motion
she could not even cry.

She could not say a single word
not even the word stop
her eyes began to open
she saw him there on top.

she felt him pumping into her
she could not even scream
she closed her eyes and thought real hard
this has to be a dream.

She felt him getting rigid
then she heard him sigh
the drug that she was given
would not even let her cry.

She felt him climbing off
he left her there and bare
she looked around the room
for the friends she thought were there.

She knew that she was raped
she still had no control
she tried to move and yell out
but no place could she go.

Of her he took advantage
he ruined this young girls life
turned her life upside down
and filled her life with strife.

A hurting fifteen year old girl
her life was starting to grow
her average life changed as many teens
she really didn’t know.

She took her life that night
she did not want to live
heaven bound as a Free Soul
she had two lives to give...

Penned By MPK

NOTE: This poem was created with the hopes that more
parents become involved in their childrens lives
and activities. Too many young people have no
sound direction towards their future and too
many adults set very poor examples for them to follow...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/5/2009 5:02:00 PM
This happens all too often. Girls are not taught how to defend themselfs. I know this girl couldn't, I couldn't at 19, but your right if parents had said "look if you drink or do drugs this could happen" for me it would have helped I think. And self defense classes for girls should be a must. Light & Love
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:17:00 AM
Its a terrible thing that this actually happens, as I was reading this poem I felt like I was in the girl's shoes, feeling what she felt. Amazing!!
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Date: 7/10/2008 11:38:00 AM
A Triple 7 for this one. More and more of this is happening all the time. I pray God's protection over youngpeople here and everywhere. Great write. Need to be shared in the schools.
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Date: 7/10/2008 11:04:00 AM
Mickey here here I wish all parents would get involved sad poem but true to whats happeing today! Thank you for your comments on my poetry! Kindly Laura :)
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