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Breaking free of stagnant pacing
Through doors hanging off hinges to freedom
Fighting the tyrant mentors calling you out
Though you haven't reached perfection
Flaws are greatness, 
For they make your work stand out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations Hannah on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The Grook". Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 11:27 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest. Well done. BG
Horsman Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:50 PM
congratulations on this winning Grook. Harry
Freeman Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:28 PM
Congratulations, Hannah on your winning poem. Agape, Moses
Henderson Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:08 PM
Congrats on your no. 4 tie in my Grook contest.
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 2:39 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hannah. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 11:16 PM
Good luck in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
Muzzey Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Very interesting way of looking of looking at the negitive, I like it, great write. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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July 9, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Creative use of imagery to share your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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July 9, 2010 at 2:32 PM
There are times when one has to face the negative and defeat it with positivism. Darkness will always be chased away by the light. Keep shining! The essence of this poem is just awesome. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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