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Breaking free of stagnant pacing Through doors hanging off hinges to freedom Fighting the tyrant mentors calling you out Though you haven't reached perfection Flaws are greatness, For they make your work stand out

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Date: 7/14/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Hannah on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The Grook". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:27:00 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest. Well done. BG
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:50:00 PM
congratulations on this winning Grook. Harry
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Hannah on your winning poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:08:00 PM
Congrats on your no. 4 tie in my Grook contest.
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:39:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hannah. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:16:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:10:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:51:00 PM
Very interesting way of looking of looking at the negitive, I like it, great write. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:44:00 PM
Creative use of imagery to share your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:32:00 PM
There are times when one has to face the negative and defeat it with positivism. Darkness will always be chased away by the light. Keep shining! The essence of this poem is just awesome. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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