Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Free Motion

Tapped percussion dribbles a wham,rushing
on quivers of sensation through my blood,
when duskfall changes its beat to jazz
a dizzy ride in gush of night, I roll.

Notes throbbing a cadence along blues' mood
as velvet of skin begins to open,
unmentionable thrills of breath unwind
claimed by music so raw, wild hips sashay.

Hands unfurl in a lift of tempo's rise;
while my body gyrates in free motion
like rippling fire, I can't stop toes ablaze
and the circle of groove jives on to reel.

Oh, just one more grasp of this revelry
while conga drums beg for another dance
inhaling euphoric whim, life's vein
where pulses burst as dawn's moments arrive!


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Mood Music with Original Details Contest
Sponsor: Sheri  F. Harper
by nette onclaud 

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Skat A February 26, 2014 at 9:24 PM Nette , thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~

Bukang Liwayway February 25, 2014 at 6:00 AM Wow!! another great piece...I'm your fan. Congratulations on your win ;) Bangkok is still in red alert....thanks for your concern. Hugssss :)

Shadow Hamilton February 25, 2014 at 2:52 AM ooh Nette this sings and dances lovely poem congrats on win hugs

Connie Gildersleeve February 24, 2014 at 2:27 PM Wow, this is fabulous Nette. Way to go girl. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smile, Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta February 24, 2014 at 3:49 AM Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,nette

Sheri Fresonke Harper February 24, 2014 at 12:18 AM Congratulations on your win Nette--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your sense of dance and rhythm. Thanks for entering my contest.

Shadow Hamilton January 25, 2014 at 10:58 AM you carried me into your dream Nette excellent pen Shadow x smile hug

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 25, 2014 at 6:34 AM Very skillfully written. Love the highlighted poem within, too. If you haven't written a poetry book, yet, you should. (I looked to see and couldn't find one. I think I would enjoy owning a book of your poems...just saying. So let me know if and when...)

Deepak Chalise January 24, 2014 at 8:35 PM Dance and veil in the submerge of lines. It is great to read line by line. Prefarably it is wonderful and nectar in the realm of poetic fame. Bravo! keep it up.

Funom Makama January 24, 2014 at 3:34 PM What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2014 at 2:20 PM Very expressive lines penned...Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2014 at 1:42 PM - Makes me think back in time ...... A truly superb poem, Nette. - Have a enjoyable weekend, enjoy! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carly Lalion January 24, 2014 at 12:54 PM Pump up the rhythm! This upbeat poem makes my adrenaline rush as the tempo of music invigorates.Awesome! Am glad I placed in your contest, Nette. Thank you lots!

Russell Sivey January 24, 2014 at 6:41 AM I just love a good beat, a great song, and better yet, a strong rhythm! You really do love the night don't you Nette? I too just love the night, there's something euphoric about the night that can't be explained except through a poem...and your poem here is one such explanation! I surely loved reading this amazing beat enhanced poem this morning! Music casts a spell on you too Nette, ah it does wonders to me as well! What a fantastic piece, such an outstanding poem, Great Work!!