Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Free Falling

by Michael J Falotico

                                                        Cries in the dark swim..
                                                      Asleep in a world not real..
                                                         Feet running in place..

                                                         Steps taken in haste..
                                                The edge not seen but still touched..
                                                       Free falling from dreams ..

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Dinda Minardi June 16, 2011 at 6:51 AM The edge not seen but still touched, free falling from dreams... wonder how life can screw us... This poem, I'm sure everyone can relate.. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 8:48 PM this happens to me all the time.. free falling from top of buildings into space.. scary but exciting too as these words have personality and emotion my White Knight.. Jersey Girl in relaxed mode now.luv..

Didi Oguejiofor June 12, 2011 at 4:30 PM I like the 'feet running in place' and 'free falling from dreams' lines. that's kind of what i'm feeling right now :( thanks for your comment on my poem :)

Poet Tacito June 12, 2011 at 7:10 AM Tom Petty running thru my mind now with this. Wonderful lines. Michael J. Falotico June 12, 2011 at 7:26 AM Thanks Drake,he is a fav. of mine....