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Free Falling

Free falling - wish I could stop Trying to find my way back to the top Fearful of what awaits me down there Gasping and gulping, need a breath of fresh air Praying each day, singing songs of hope But no rescue in sight, not even a rope Lower I go, when will it end? But I know somewhere below is a blanket of friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/10/2018 6:27:00 AM
Lovely lines Heni.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:15:00 AM
A blanket of friends is what we all need the most when we close ourselves up and refuse to land on the blanket.
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Date: 7/26/2018 11:08:00 AM
Well expressed. Life can be this sometimes, as you describe! :)
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