Free Fall

I feel your pull and I can't resist. I'm about to jump into the abyss.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/18/2017 6:57:00 AM

Short, but powerful!!! Congrats Alexis, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/2/2016 5:08:00 PM

Short, snappy and straight to the point Alexis. Many hands reach out now to pull you back into the light. Take the hand offered and take one step backwards, that is always the first step....Vladislav

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/7/2016 7:27:00 AM

Great choice of words Alexis, very impactful.

White Sage

Date: 12/31/2015 5:15:00 AM

yea, fall freely...beautiful short poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2015 8:02:00 PM

wow, it's short but VERY effective. Love it.

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/30/2015 6:31:00 PM

The love jump is the very best part of it all Alexis...I love the clarity and gravity of the love pull you express Poetess...J.A.B.

Peter Dome

Date: 12/30/2015 4:18:00 PM

I hope not. I'm here to catch you fall. So sad, I just wish you could come out if your depression, It saddens me. I write a poem with the same title years ago, and I'm still here. thinking of you, Pete.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/30/2015 12:17:00 PM

Sad. Short but very well written. You're not alone, I also know how it feels.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/30/2015 7:49:00 AM

I pull you upwards my dearest Alexis! Please, your spirit yearns for truth and love, let us all fight for that! Just to wish you and your family: Happy New Year! May the Good Lord, grant you health, love, happiness And the realization of each of your dreams!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/29/2015 5:02:00 PM

I have those days too Alexis. Keep letting your feelings out. Maybe one day we all will be surrounded by bliss.