Free Fall

I feel your pull and I
can't resist.

I'm about to jump
into the abyss.

how i feelfree verse

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Teddy Kimathi

January 18, 2017 at 6:57 AM

Short, but powerful!!! Congrats Alexis, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Vladislav Raven

February 2, 2016 at 5:08 PM

Short, snappy and straight to the point Alexis. Many hands reach out now to pull you back into the light. Take the hand offered and take one step backwards, that is always the first step....Vladislav

Michael Whatley

January 7, 2016 at 7:27 AM

Great choice of words Alexis, very impactful.

White Sage

December 31, 2015 at 5:15 AM

yea, fall freely...beautiful short poem

Andrea Dietrich

December 30, 2015 at 8:02 PM

wow, it's short but VERY effective. Love it.

Justin Bordner

December 30, 2015 at 6:31 PM

The love jump is the very best part of it all Alexis...I love the clarity and gravity of the love pull you express Poetess...J.A.B.

Peter Dome

December 30, 2015 at 4:18 PM

I hope not. I'm here to catch you fall. So sad, I just wish you could come out if your depression, It saddens me. I write a poem with the same title years ago, and I'm still here. thinking of you, Pete.

Hansteven Selfa

December 30, 2015 at 12:17 PM

Sad. Short but very well written. You're not alone, I also know how it feels.

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 30, 2015 at 7:49 AM

I pull you upwards my dearest Alexis! Please, your spirit yearns for truth and love, let us all fight for that! Just to wish you and your family: Happy New Year! May the Good Lord, grant you health, love, happiness And the realization of each of your dreams!