Free Fall

I feel your pull and I
can't resist.

I'm about to jump
into the abyss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/18/2017 6:57:00 AM
Short, but powerful!!! Congrats Alexis, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:08:00 PM
Short, snappy and straight to the point Alexis. Many hands reach out now to pull you back into the light. Take the hand offered and take one step backwards, that is always the first step....Vladislav
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:27:00 AM
Great choice of words Alexis, very impactful.
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Date: 12/31/2015 5:15:00 AM
yea, fall freely...beautiful short poem
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Date: 12/30/2015 8:02:00 PM
wow, it's short but VERY effective. Love it.
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:31:00 PM
The love jump is the very best part of it all Alexis...I love the clarity and gravity of the love pull you express Poetess...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:18:00 PM
I hope not. I'm here to catch you fall. So sad, I just wish you could come out if your depression, It saddens me. I write a poem with the same title years ago, and I'm still here. thinking of you, Pete.
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Date: 12/30/2015 12:17:00 PM
Sad. Short but very well written. You're not alone, I also know how it feels.
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Date: 12/30/2015 7:49:00 AM
I pull you upwards my dearest Alexis! Please, your spirit yearns for truth and love, let us all fight for that! Just to wish you and your family: Happy New Year! May the Good Lord, grant you health, love, happiness And the realization of each of your dreams!
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:02:00 PM
I have those days too Alexis. Keep letting your feelings out. Maybe one day we all will be surrounded by bliss.
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