Michael Dom Poet Senryu

Free Education

Three senryu for free education

a right provided
like a prized jewel
free education

a few boxes ticked
to keep the voters happy
free education

a bone to toss for
hungry dogs to fight over
free education





Michael Dom for 'GET YOUR SENRYU ON' Contest

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:09 PM Michael, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Paul Callus April 12, 2015 at 11:10 AM I'm in favour of free education, but sometimes it comes at a price! Congrats on your win, Dom! // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2015 at 10:18 PM I really enjoyed this one the first time , how you kept that theme going with these three and here again to say big congratulations.

Judy Konos April 11, 2015 at 5:18 PM Thanks for being in my contest...You have a food for thought one here...thanks again Michael Dom April 11, 2015 at 10:43 PM Hi Judy, thanks for putting me in your line-up - I have eaten at that table and am guilty as charged! Cheers!

Jan Allison April 11, 2015 at 10:15 AM We are lucky to have free education just wish they would leave the exam system alone - great poems congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2015 at 11:11 PM Hmmm, three different views on it. I enjoyed seeing these, Michael. BTW, were you the one who came to me about sapphic stanza? I was told mine is still not quite right. Back to the drawing board!! Michael Dom April 11, 2015 at 10:45 PM Hi Andrea, I'm enjoying the drawing board too.