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why? why did we do that? who knows? who knows why a rebel held a rose a rose who rose to the occasion and lent lessons on how to hold a flower properly and not as property or such tender to the touch lest flakes of red be shed from lips of moisture born two souls so close yet two minds set so far apart still heart met panting heart on nights of youthful yearning that rebel bent on learning the rose dripping virgin dew and all this so very brand new................. the rose laid the rebel's head gently upon a cloud of angels claimed her bed while a rebel was held captive by every petal and what that rose had said she urged "i be a rose for a bebel to behold, i, a bit older yet here to soothe two souls smoldering with desires a rose who glows and a rerbel who sets fires ...............why? did you inquire as to why we did what we did while passion's persuasion persuasively hid why? who knows... do you mmy rebel's rose (c) 2012.....PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

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Date: 2/18/2012 9:32:00 PM
You've got some nice alliteration in here, and I love "A rose that rose to the occasion." If you correct some of the spelling, this will be/is an excellent situational poem that I very much enjoyed reading.  -KMD
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