Free Cee the Rose That Grows Next Door

why?
why did we do that?
who knows?
who knows why a rebel held a rose
a rose who rose to the occasion
and lent lessons on how to hold a flower
properly and not as property or such
tender to the touch
lest flakes of red be shed from lips of moisture born
two souls so close
yet two minds set so far apart
still heart met panting heart on nights of youthful yearning
that rebel bent on learning
the rose dripping virgin dew
and all this so very brand new.................
the rose laid the rebel's head gently upon a cloud of angels claimed her bed
while a rebel was held captive by every petal and what that rose had said
she urged "i be a rose for a bebel to behold,
i, a bit older yet here to soothe two souls smoldering with desires
a rose who glows and a rerbel who sets fires
...............why?
did you inquire as to why we did what we did
while passion's persuasion persuasively hid
why?
who knows...
do you mmy rebel's rose 
  (c) 2012.....PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Magee-Dittberner Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:32 PM
You've got some nice alliteration in here, and I love "A rose that rose to the occasion." If you correct some of the spelling, this will be/is an excellent situational poem that I very much enjoyed reading.  -KMD
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