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Free Cee Romeo and Oh What's Her Name

ROMEO AND OH, WHAT'S HER NAME The only thing I know about love is how to say goodbye I recall us meeting in a little park and you seemed so shy You laughed when a duck waddled over your naked toes and I pictured you with ribbons, buds and bows we spoke the day away with ambient ambition talking about penance and contrition I heard the words from lips that seemed so true and that day's wondrous gift for me was you from the park we made our way to an old coffee shop it was well past midnight as an old gentlemen pushed a mop we spoke about the world and the state it's in and how penance and contrition come after sin I loved you in a Romeo and Juliet kind of way and will always remember that very first day as certain as I am that birds can fly and then come to die all i've ever learned from love is how to say goodbye © 2013.....copyright PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

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Date: 2/18/2013 12:47:00 PM
What I meant, ~free cee!~, is that saying goodbye can be so sad and so full of sorrow... especially when preceeded a sweet 'R & J kind of' love... being said goodbye to is perhaps less sweet...Terry... In any case, your poem moves... in many senses...
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Date: 2/14/2013 12:28:00 PM
... such sweet sorrow, FREE CEE!
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:02:00 AM
Jeffry but in between the lines lies a true romantic....David
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:40:00 AM
Very well written, Jeffry. - Have a sweet heart day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2013 9:27:00 PM
Jeffry you do have beautiful words and a beautiful heart, you have a reason to live high on life friend...anyway you choose.....always you are a wonderful poet.
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:03:00 PM
I loved the title, and the poem was a great read. Thanks for posting it.
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:36:00 PM
This is an excellent poem, you have a way of capturing a moment. Well done!
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