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first of all my all abiding love for you cannot be frought with dangers so we have to make some serious changes everything we do has to be a mutual decision lest we suffer an everlasting division you know how much i love to hold you and holding you often becomes what i want to do i'd like to know how you could deny me four whole days and then decide we're going to do things only in your ways how do you deny me four days in a row and then expect me, for once, not to say no there has to come a time when you do something just to please me and believe me honey, i know you know exactly badly you tease me then all of a sudden when i say i'm too tired to make love to you how you have the nerve to throw me out of your room i haven't a clue ten minutes later you decide you don't want to sleep alone and how you can defend that will, for me, remain unknown either we both decide when making love is warranted and a need and embracing each other is passionately decreed but you saying no four days in a row with some kind of lame excuse is tantamount to physical and emotional abuse so either it's the way i say it's now going to be or there will be no more you and me so make up your mind if you will live up to my request because love shouldn't be some kind of unfair test and as for me i don't want to end up as perfect strangers so we have to quickly make some serious changes free

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Date: 2/27/2012 3:23:00 AM
sounds like you are dealing with a wild fire BURNING up the charts brother! Interesting style I am not used to from you. I like the variation of your artillery! ( oh yeh, btw...you sure she wasn't just raggin'...that time of the month. Not all women like to canoe down the Red River!) I'm jokin bro. You killed this poem! NICE WUrK!
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