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Free Cee a Respectful Rebuttal To Ms Cathy Holmes I Rise

DIE ARISE WHENEVER I WAKE UP AND ARISE I AM TOO ALARMED TO OPEN MINE EYES DUE TO YOUR GOD FOR CREATING MORE SORROW AND THE FURTHERERNCE OF FEAR FOR YET ANOTHER TOMORROW WHAT WILL I DO WITH THIS BRAND NEW DAY? I SUPPOSE I SHALL SIMPLY ATTEMPT TO CHASE MORE DEMONS AWAY WILL I FEAR THE PUTRIFIED AIR I AM FORCED TO SUCK IN? WHICH IS JUST DESERTS FOR MANKINDS EVERY SIN? WILL I WEEP FOR THE TREES, FLOWERS AND POLLUTED SEA AIR AND CRY FOR THAT WHICH HUMANITY IS DOING TO THE RAIN FOREST THAT I CONSIDER UNFAIR? WILL I LOOK AT THE DESTRUCTION OF BEAUTY I CANNOT TAKE FOR GRANTED, AND THINK ABOUT THE PUTRID GROUND IN WHICH TOO MANY OF MY FRIENDS CORPSES ARE PLANTED? WILL I CURSE YOUR GOD FOR THE HORROR AND HORRENDOUS NATURE OF THINGS HE HAS WILLED, WHILST CONDEMNING HIM FOR THE LITTLE INNOCENTS HE BI-MONTHLY HAS KILLED? ALL I CAN DO IS FEAR, BE FRIGHTENED AND FRET AND TAKE ANOTHER SHOT OF TEQUILLA THAT MIGHT ALLOW ME TO FORGET (C) 2012....PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~ P.S. IN CASE YOU'VE NEVER HEARD IT A SINGER NAMED DALLAS HOLMS HAS A SONG ENTITLE "RISE AGAIN" AND IT IS AMAZINLY INSPIRATIONAL!

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Date: 2/11/2012 2:04:00 PM
Dallas Holms is one of my favorite Christian artists. I'm surprised you like his song, considering much of your poetry you seem angry at God or blame Him for earth's troubles. In my opinion, alcohol doesn't help our problems, it just makes them worse. You didn't ask for my opinion so I hope this doesn't upset you. I'm just speaking my mind. God Bless! Love, KIm
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