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A DAY OF DETRIMENTAL MENTALITY

That was a day I’d rather forget
A day worse than any can get
It wasn’t a day of torrential rain
It was, however, a day of undeniable pain

It started with the sun shining bright
And nothing to hint at a horrible night
But then the world may as well have imploded
When secrets were suddenly decoded

Then the sun faded and the rain began
It came to soak a sodden man
But it didn’t matter because the day couldn’t get worse
For a sodden soldier born with a curse

In retrospect the rain really didn’t matter
Although it did make quite a clatter
The matter was a man’s broken heart
On a day I wish had never come to a start

So then the sunshine ended but not so the rain
And certainly everlasting was the pain
I lost a woman who made my life complete
On a day of sorrow with which I could not compete
      © 2012…..PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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