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A DAY OF DETRIMENTAL MENTALITY That was a day I’d rather forget A day worse than any can get It wasn’t a day of torrential rain It was, however, a day of undeniable pain It started with the sun shining bright And nothing to hint at a horrible night But then the world may as well have imploded When secrets were suddenly decoded Then the sun faded and the rain began It came to soak a sodden man But it didn’t matter because the day couldn’t get worse For a sodden soldier born with a curse In retrospect the rain really didn’t matter Although it did make quite a clatter The matter was a man’s broken heart On a day I wish had never come to a start So then the sunshine ended but not so the rain And certainly everlasting was the pain I lost a woman who made my life complete On a day of sorrow with which I could not compete © 2012…..PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

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