Get Your Premium Membership

Free Again

In the beauty of the forest, down floats a feather, a feeling of release, no wrists bound and tethered. In the calm of my forest, I step into the lake, beginning to ebb the pain, because now im awake. standing in the shallows, with the feather in my hand, as water tendrils brush my ankles, watching sky and land. above treetops far away, I see a lone crane fly, his feather a sign of healed pain, and I let out a sigh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/13/2010 7:40:00 AM
Always great to release the tensiion writing poetry.. an amazing piece Jordan and very creative with the nature theme intertwined into the emotional outcome.. enjoyed with luv..
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things