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Trapped like ants within a crystal hill armed antennas scrape the facets, we linger back lit raving, for the giant's foot fall. Gargantuan god see micro we, please resist stomp not, free. Poet: Debbie Guzzi Date 6/7/2012 Contest: Imagination

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2012 12:46:00 PM

a darn good write, debbie... did we miss on syl count " for the giant's foot to fall?..."... still, a winner in this heart of mine!..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/8/2012 6:38:00 AM

A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Debbie. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2012 6:16:00 AM

Great work that will be in the winners' list for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/7/2012 11:35:00 PM

Looks like a good nonet entry for Nette's contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/7/2012 2:28:00 PM

What an incredible write Debbie! I really enjoyed the prequel to the artwork! I can visualize the whole scenario and it's fantastic! Great Work!!