Free

Trapped like ants within a crystal hill
armed antennas scrape the facets, 
we linger back lit raving,
for the giant's foot fall.
Gargantuan god
see micro we,
please resist
stomp not,
free.


Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Date 6/7/2012
Contest: Imagination

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Nette Onclaud

June 13, 2012 at 12:46 PM

a darn good write, debbie... did we miss on syl count " for the giant's foot to fall?..."... still, a winner in this heart of mine!..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 8, 2012 at 6:38 AM

A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Debbie. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol