"free"

My hand
opens slowly,
the balloon flies..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Sometimes in life we have to open our hands and release, for so many reasons >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Very meaningful thought with explicit images, Michael
Devonshire Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Sometimes we have to "let go" to sense true freedom. Very intuitive senryu, Michael. Goes to my favorites. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Release to freedom and watch until it can be seen no more..Great write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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