Free

free  
brings one  
peaceful life  
sleep good tonight  
dream

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/20/2023 12:48:00 PM

Hmm, a blessed envisioning, Paula. I'm glad to be awake to have read it, my dear. Aloha, William

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/21/2023 10:37:00 AM

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2023 8:12:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you are awake and are enjoying my "Free" Lanterne write. It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2023 8:41:00 AM

Back with congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2023 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Lanterne write. Have a wonderful day. It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/20/2023 7:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my Lanterne write. Hugs... It's time to say good night/dream away..........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2023 12:00:00 PM

Yes, feeling free from all that could trouble brings a good night's sleep most nights. Thanks for sharing your idea with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/20/2023 7:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Free" Lanterne write. It was fun to write. Feeling free is a great feeling. It's time to say good night/dream away...........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/19/2023 10:44:00 AM

Paula, nicely done, congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my Lanterne write. It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Len Gasun

Date: 11/18/2023 7:04:00 PM

A brilliant lanterne my dear poet friend Paula. So true my dear poet friend. I love this and enjoy a lot. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend! God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 8:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Free" Lanterne write. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2023 1:35:00 PM

very nice, paula. I see it's a win. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2023 8:23:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you see you enjoyed my "Free" Lanterne write. It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/18/2023 6:28:00 AM

"3 Place" ~ Free ~~ Date Written:11/17/2023

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2023 2:59:00 AM

Very nicely done Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2023 6:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "Free" Lanterne write. I enjoyed writing it for your fun contest. Thank You for having it and for the placement. It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/17/2023 3:45:00 PM

Hello Paula, I do agree. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/18/2023 11:27:00 AM

Hello Paula, Yes I will. Dreams are strange sometimes. They also feel so real sometimes. Hugs. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2023 6:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Free" Lanterne write. Hope you are OK. Hugs... It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Deb M

Date: 11/17/2023 1:20:00 PM

Sweet gentle words Paula….lovely! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2023 6:38:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Free" write to be lovely with sweet gentle words. That makes me happy. It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/17/2023 11:46:00 AM

A lovely wish for all of us - "sleep good night, dream." Really nicely done, Paula! Blessings for your dreams! Happy Thanksgiving! PS - have been working on some holiday wreath designs and I thought of you!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2023 6:36:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Free" write. Can you do a holiday write with your wreath picture???? Let me know if you do it. I would love to see/read it. "Happy Thanksgiving" It's time to say good night/dream away.......

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/17/2023 11:00:00 AM

Free ~~ Date Written:11/17/2023

Free

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