Free

free
brings one
peaceful life
sleep good tonight
dream
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Hmm, a blessed envisioning, Paula. I'm glad to be awake to have read it, my dear. Aloha, William
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 10:37 AM
:)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you are awake and are enjoying my "Free" Lanterne write. It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 8:10 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Lanterne write. Have a wonderful day. It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:07 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my Lanterne write. Hugs... It's time to say good night/dream away..........
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Yes, feeling free from all that could trouble brings a good night's sleep most nights. Thanks for sharing your idea with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Free" Lanterne write. It was fun to write. Feeling free is a great feeling. It's time to say good night/dream away...........
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Paula, nicely done, congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my Lanterne write. It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Gasun Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 7:04 PM
A brilliant lanterne my dear poet friend Paula. So true my dear poet friend. I love this and enjoy a lot. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend! God bless you always. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Free" Lanterne write. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:35 PM
very nice, paula. I see it's a win. Congrats.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you see you enjoyed my "Free" Lanterne write. It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:28 AM
"3 Place" ~ Free ~~ Date Written:11/17/2023
May Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:59 AM
Very nicely done Paula, Congrats on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "Free" Lanterne write. I enjoyed writing it for your fun contest. Thank You for having it and for the placement. It's time to say good night/dream away.......
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Hello Paula, I do agree. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Hello Paula, Yes I will. Dreams are strange sometimes. They also feel so real sometimes. Hugs. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Free" Lanterne write. Hope you are OK. Hugs... It's time to say good night/dream away.......
M  Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 1:20 PM
Sweet gentle words Paula….lovely! Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Free" write to be lovely with sweet gentle words. That makes me happy. It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 11:46 AM
A lovely wish for all of us - "sleep good night, dream." Really nicely done, Paula! Blessings for your dreams! Happy Thanksgiving! PS - have been working on some holiday wreath designs and I thought of you!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my  "Free" write. Can you do a holiday write with your wreath picture????  Let me know if you do it. I would love to see/read it. "Happy Thanksgiving" It's time to say good night/dream away.......
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Free ~~ Date Written:11/17/2023
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