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I saw the way you looked at me And how in those moments I felt free From the smile that lit up any room To the mask you wore like a costume I saw the way your eyes lost its light When you continued the interal fight The act that's placed Won't ever be written on your face The worlds gone by With every blink of an eye You act strong in life But each breathe feels like a knife You hide your pain So that it's easier to maintain You're not alone Even if stuff is unknown I saw the way you looked at me And how in that moment a piece of you was free

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Date: 4/14/2020 8:17:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, wonderfully written, lovely poem. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/7/2020 9:33:00 PM
You definitely us the antennae God gave you! Nice one, Autumn. :) Gershon
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Date: 1/28/2020 4:10:00 PM
Good Job
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