Deneen White Poet Rhyme

Free

look up at the sky
  I wish that I could fly ever so high
 I just want to be free
  free to be only me
the moon 
      winks as the
 thoughts
    race through my mind
  unlimitless as it trails behind
  I beseech myself to let it be
    my only thought is to be free

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P Sheart August 31, 2008 at 12:19 PM Hi sweet! I love the message in this awe inspiring write. Ahhh, to truly be free is how we're all meant to be. This is a lot like my poem free to just be me. We're on the same wave length my dear! Here's to flying high and free! Take care hun. I truly loved this one. Love Light Truth Patricia

Cecil Hickman August 27, 2008 at 8:30 PM beauty and peace described in your words within this poem,,, and Thank you for all the comments and taking the time to read my poetry,,blessings...Cecil

Adell Foster August 24, 2008 at 6:07 PM Hi D-nyce, this poem has marvelous imagery and flow... let your spirit freely fly like the eagle soaring away from all things which may cause grief... Excellent writing :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

P Sheart August 12, 2008 at 1:58 PM Here's to being free! This makes me all dreamy and makes me ponder life with a sense of knowing that is real. Just berautiful! Always a pleasure to read your lovely poetry. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

John Loving Iii August 9, 2008 at 7:35 AM nice write dnece.jhl

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 8, 2008 at 3:52 PM Be you D-nyce. Nobody does it better. God Bless. Vince

Gregory Golden August 6, 2008 at 10:54 AM Solid imagery, expression and message. Freedom exist in your mind. Your mind will set you free. God is a path to freedom

Heidie Buys August 3, 2008 at 1:22 PM So much yearning expressed here, well written and touches the soul. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter July 30, 2008 at 4:48 PM Felt like you were so free you could fly when you wrote this! Dreamy and delightful to read. Love, Shar

Daver Austin July 30, 2008 at 12:41 PM I love this, deneen. Sounds like something a person would say wishing upon a star at night. Something about it is so simple and fine. Love, daver