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Freddy Farkle

Freddy Farkle, fumbling forecaster for Forestville, friggin' fudged Friday forecast....fair?! first florid felicitous, falling flurries followed, froze flowers, foiled! faraway farmhouse, furrowing farmland, frigid fanny, furious, frustrated, frumpy, frazzled! furry forest friends furnished flannel frock, finding Freddy's fails funny, frivolity, fortunately frequent fallible forecasts found Freddy flying faraway, fallaciously forecasting for fermented folks!

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Howard Kerr

Date: 2/21/2024 5:44:00 AM

Regina, I have returned to complement you on your much deserved win. An alliteration that is effortlessly brilliant, with concise comic caper writing at its core. Mood elevation at its zenith. Endless rounds of applause. Warm wishes Howard

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/21/2024 1:11:00 PM

A thousand thank you's, good poetry friend. I really enjoyed penning this one. I'm so pleased you like it. Have a grand late winter evening. All the best to you. ~

Robert Sidwell

Date: 2/20/2024 9:55:00 AM

Hahahaha! Fun stuff! Congratulations on your placement!!

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/20/2024 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Robert, I really enjoyed writing it. I think it would be entertaining at an elementary or middle school poetry recital. Many blessings to you. ~

Suzette Richards

Date: 2/19/2024 8:59:00 PM

Oh, I can just imagine someone trying to deliver these lines in front of a live audience... Fun :) Congratulations on your placement, Gina.

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/20/2024 5:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Suzette. I really enjoyed writing it. I think it would go over well at an elementary or middle school poetry recital, lol! Many blessings to you. ~~~~~

Tom Woody

Date: 2/19/2024 3:20:00 PM

How you managed this gem with nothing but F words I'll never know. It was worth placing for effort alone Gina. Congrats

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/19/2024 3:35:00 PM

My deepest gratitude, Tom! I love alliteration and enjoyed penning this poem. Have a grand and creative week!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/21/2023 7:57:00 AM

Enjoyed your alliterative verse with its friggin’ good humor.

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/21/2023 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! My warmest wishes for a festive family Thanksgiving!

Howard Kerr

Date: 11/18/2023 7:34:00 PM

Regina An effortless alliteration on your part which comes as no surprise to me. Eloquent testimony to your stature. Congratulations to you on your success in the Any Poem challenge. My entry “Wee Small Hours” was selected too. Thank you kindly for your soupmail re my podium medal in Lanterne contest. I have recently won a poetry nook competition with my piece “ Spineless In The Running” which I have posted on poetry soup as well. Onwards and upwards for both of us Howard

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/20/2023 3:34:00 PM

Thank you greatly, Howard. Wonderful news about your recent wins both here at the Soup and the Nook. You have richly earned every literary award. Bravo! Onwards and Upwards for us! :)))))

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2023 1:54:00 PM

I did not know that we had so many words in the English language with the starting letter of F. Just kidding. Great alliterations. Thank you for sharing this talent with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara K

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/20/2023 3:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. Some poets don't care for alliteration, but I enjoy the challenge. Have a warm and restful evening, poetry friend. ~

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/17/2023 2:58:00 PM

looks as if you've mastered alliteration, Regina. My tongue twisted on itself when I tried to read this out loud. Smiles :-) Enjoy your day, Sara

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/20/2023 3:40:00 PM

My deepest thanks, Sara. Some poets don't care for alliteration, but I enjoy the "puzzle" of finding the words in the dictionary and piecing them all together. You & Bill have a serene November evening. :))))