Freakishly Warm

I like an empty trash basket.
It tempts me to fill it with wads of wasted effort
In a futile attempt to write the words 
That will finally win your heart.
Perhaps when hell freezes over,
But it’s a freakishly warm day in mid-December.
When the offering basket is full
Of ardent vulnerabilities
I'll dump it out, count my blessings, 
And start over.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kgaswane Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 12:21 AM
Hi MichaeThis is an interesting short poem that stimulates one's imagination. Regards Mpho.
Hankins Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Michael, I really like this little poem. I can picture the scene...the empty wastebasket, the offering basket is full... the idea of counting your blessings and starting all over, so common to us, your readers. Good stuff!
Woodrow Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 6:30 PM
very nice .. had to smile at hell freezing coz I find cold hellish :)
Kalavik Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 8:47 PM
;-)
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