Frayed

in that dimly lit haze that brushes
the slippery side of a soul
we hide the silence of words and
the echoes of a soundless heart
that suffers when the garments of bones
becomes frayed beyond the condition of hope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 30, 2010 at 10:15 AM
What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Mark. Very excited when I seen you had a post here as it has been so long since you have posted. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Very creative and interesting write , Mark
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September 29, 2010 at 6:30 PM
Very enjoyable! needs an - of- taken out in front of soundless heart, which would make that line one of the best i've read--- brilliant poem
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